here is my final product and my evaluation.

final cover

here is my final cover from the first cover i have made many altercation and change the layout this is because i felt that the cover wasn`t clear enought on what it was advertising in its puffs and teasers also i chage the centra imges from the group image to the image of jake on his own . i did this because it fits better with the genral coventions of a music magazine . also i have changed the style of the tittle .i feel this makes the magaize more eye catching .

my final cover

evaulitaing my first draft

evalutaion my first draft of my doulbe page spread

the change of my music magazine covers

this was my first cover

and this is how i have re-placed my items . i feel now the front cover is clear and readable

here u can see i have re-placed items on my magazinge cover this is because i had as for my peras for there oppions

prelim evaluation ~( contents page)

evaulation for perlim task (front cover)

vibes double pages spread

fan the fire double page spread podcast

update arpril 16th 2010

fan the fire contents page podcasted

i have chosen to podcast as i am finding it difficult to put pen to paper and for it to read what its ment to say .

front cover

you can see how my magazine cover has devopled over a period of time . once i changed the design i also changerd the layout . this was so that it was clear for the reader to read and so i could make the most of my now cetral image

here is my final cover
you can see it is alot diffrent to what i origanaly flate plan this is cause i had to change it so it apperaed to my target audience.

here is a step by step build up to my front cover

update

like i have done with my double page spread i have decide to re done the cover as i feel it dosent appearl to the target audience i am trying to sell this magazine to

new layout of double page

here you can see that i have changed the layout

of my doylbe page articel . i feel now its easier to read .

building up my magazine

here is the beggingin og my front cover and doulble page spread this is only my first sort of draft so they is alot of blank space .

front cover

i have chosen a soft grey as i feel its a better back ground then white and black would have been to dark also i a baby pink as i think it complments the soft grey .

i have chosen to have to photo on the front cover at the bottom and in black and white cause i think it stands out .

i have also in my first draft used red as it conetas sex and i feel it will make the readers want to read what is says.

double page spread

i have again used a soft grey for my background cover this is becasuie i feel that the soft grey is easier to read off then white also because i have ued grey as my backgriound colour i have written in a ungerneric colour i feel this makes the writting stand of the page . i have chosen to have 2 of my images black and white in my articel so far and to have 1 in colour this is so it draws attention to the colour image , this is because the image is of the gilrs in theer dresses and i feel that this is the most sexcual images and i want to draw attention to that .

first draft of articel

this is my first draft of my articel . its done on word this is do i can check speeling and because i have to wait to use the mac to put everything together on photoshop .

college magazine contents page